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Thursday, 30 August 2018

My narrative writing

Tiny woman - Elizabeth


Elizabeth admires salad food from 5 star restaurants,
tea and Elizabeth occasionally eats hard boiled eggs.
Elizabeth occasionally sleeps all night but wakes up at at 1 am.
She loves to go to the mall.


problem- got second place in a beauty pageant


Elizabeth always gets first place but this time she got second
place and she was crying for six hours.

solution- Call her best friend she said she'll win next year.

2 comments:

  1. i love your work and how you described Tiny woman and i like how her name is Elizabeth and i like the way that Tiny woman love's to have tea and that Elizabeth admires salad food from 5 star restaurants' i was wondering if you can say what she looks like? (by casey)

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  2. Hi Heidi I like the name of tiny woman!. Elisabeth is a good name!.
    Maybe next time you could publish the story to this. And maybe describe or name the friend.
    This is reminding me of a time that I wrote a story and the girl in my story won a beauty pageant but that was when I was littler.

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